Making it AMAZING!!!

We have made some decisions as a group as to how we could bring the story line to  more climatic beginning. As both Brian and Simon thought that our opening sequence wasn't clear enough we decided to add more to the beginning of the sequence. 

Tara is now going to find evidence of Ryan and her sisters where abouts in her dad's office when she goes to look for a misplaced item. She finds a folder and follows up the clues. 

Throughout the scene in the office were going to create flashes of the sister (Rach) in her prison to add suspense to the film opening. We are also going to add struggling noises over the top of the opening sequence to add an element of fear and frustration to the audience. 

Hopefully this will add more clarity to what we've done now.