voiceover suggestions

Great on representation/ genre/ soundtrack/ audience feedback/ technology

Talk about classification  - 15 cert?

Distribution needs work

Making it AMAZING!!!

We have made some decisions as a group as to how we could bring the story line to  more climatic beginning. As both Brian and Simon thought that our opening sequence wasn't clear enough we decided to add more to the beginning of the sequence. 

Tara is now going to find evidence of Ryan and her sisters where abouts in her dad's office when she goes to look for a misplaced item. She finds a folder and follows up the clues. 

Throughout the scene in the office were going to create flashes of the sister (Rach) in her prison to add suspense to the film opening. We are also going to add struggling noises over the top of the opening sequence to add an element of fear and frustration to the audience. 

Hopefully this will add more clarity to what we've done now. 

What Brian thought was wrong

Our teacher Brian thought that the opening sequence of our film called 'SCARLETT' lacked depth and consistency. It didn't link well to what our film was going to be about and the audience wouldn't have been able to understand what was going to happen next and why it was happening in the first place. 

What we've filmed so far

We have already filmed and edited the scene where the character of Ryan d'Muster (played by Rome) is shot and killed by Scalett (played by Tara). This scene has music already put to it however this music may have to change due to changes that could be made to the scene. 

This scene was filmed in a dark room in the Performing Arts building of Reigate College. 

Update

Actors:

Rach - Sister

Tara - Spy

Rome - Gangster

Story line:

(Opening)

A the daughter of a rich MI5 worker has been kidnapped by one of the worlds most feared gangsters; Antonio d'Muster. Her sister 'Scarlett' finds evidence that Antonio's son 'Ryan' is somehow involved in the kidnapping. Scarlett hunts Ryan down to Reigate College and kills him to get her own back. 

(Film Continued...)

The rest of the film concentrates on following Scarlett and her journey to find her beloved sister with twists and turns at every corner. 

Feedback

We agree sequence is well constructed, etc...but
A long week of discussions and deliberations but the blog shows nothing - why not?
Record of your changes please and fast
Y0u need to recognise the importance of this tool

editing

Make a rough cut of your project to present to the class next Monday 2nd March